I made a thing.
Not very long or difficult, more of a test and made to kill some time. Should be easy to finish in about 10 minutes.
It's called Orpheus.
Your name is Dan, and you will bring your beloved Lily back.
It's my first game, and it's not a big deal but I thought I should share it anyway.http://www.mediafire.com/?jm50v8dm6bp9ex5
I… don't know man. It was like everyone's first game.
But keep going, you could do great things later if you practice storytelling and all. The whole game was so bare and simple that I couldn't even "feel" it.
But hey, it was made by yourself and had wise solutions like the lighting in the cave. I won't say that the ending was unexpected or that I enjoyed it that much but seriously keep going. If you haven't had the potential I would have stopped playing it in like the first two minutes.
Neat story. The whole thing is a bit too minimalist for my tastes, though. Also, the narration and storytelling, like that other Anon said, could be better.