No.1455
            
         A little bland. You need a gimmick or something. Maybe you could draw shitty pictures to go along with the shitty stories? A lot of it feels anti-climatic.
 No.1456
            
         >>1455thank you for constructive advice, i will try to make it more interesting :)
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         >>1454Why did you remove the video?
  No.1939
            
         would